Yeah, like furarsuNOnegai-san said that. the wing look off side. try to match it
okay? i can see you put emboss thing on the wing. that is not good. try to put
outer glow on it. ^^ btw, the color of the background doesnt match with the
scan. i think you should put more darker clolor on the background.the lighting
also can add touch on it.
The lee- did you squeezed it? i kind of funny in the way i look. and yeah, the
green light not soo look tht natural.
pretty like it.
But it quite simple.
She is like floating around.
try to put her on the surface of the water.
i dont like the dar blue rectangle on the text. remove that.
i see your wall is quite interesting. its quite simple and its dark fit with
that L .
Oh, try to ask the moderator. they sure can help you with more detail on it.
i like your wallie
, but yeah the same as people pointing at.. the character looks blur. and i like
the wing but the colour of wing seems like out from the place. hope that did'nt
offend you
i like your wall, pretty good in your first wallie. but its little bit blank or
i say plain on the background. you should some texture on it so that the
background is a bit awake up
What a nice doujin ^-^
since it is looked messy
maybe you should cleaned up the background
personally, i dislike this wall
it's way to simple and bored
1. ::When Cherry Blossom Bloom:: by Mya102
2. Welcome To My Darkness by enchantment
3.Picnic... Above The Clouds by kiokorenay703
Vectors
1.My entity by entity1660
2.Time of Recreation by moonescape
3.Relax ~ The Freedom of Summer by ASH-Hikari
Doujinshi
1 ***Of L.O.S.T. -MEmorIeS*** by tydaisuke1
2 Freedom in the moonlight by starhellokittyangel
3 **freedom angel*** by azumi11
1st:i will love you forver
2st:vintage love
3rd: soundless affection
Ganbate no kudasai all ^^
hmm, not sure about it.
Yeah, like furarsuNOnegai-san said that. the wing look off side. try to match it okay? i can see you put emboss thing on the wing. that is not good. try to put outer glow on it. ^^ btw, the color of the background doesnt match with the scan. i think you should put more darker clolor on the background.the lighting also can add touch on it.
The lee- did you squeezed it? i kind of funny in the way i look. and yeah, the green light not soo look tht natural.
pretty like it.
But it quite simple.
She is like floating around.
try to put her on the surface of the water.
i dont like the dar blue rectangle on the text. remove that.
i see your wall is quite interesting. its quite simple and its dark fit with that L .
Oh, try to ask the moderator. they sure can help you with more detail on it.
(mind if i join too.?.)
*avoid the hammer*
*runs to rika*
daijoubu?
*then grabs tnt and throw to next poster*
congratulations to all
my votes:
2
4
5
Ganbate no kudasai!
Nice effect that ou put on rika-san.
You should submit it. i'll add fav on that ^^
I need the codes ^^ , thanks ^^
Nice, i like it.. ^^
oh,you should darken the charcter a bit more.. ^^
i like your wallie
, but yeah the same as people pointing at.. the character looks blur. and i like
the wing but the colour of wing seems like out from the place. hope that did'nt
offend you 
I want to start now! ^_^
Yes!
There will be contest soon! Yay! ^_^ 
i guess so..
you already edited it!
btw, next time we made a new contest?
yup, i agree with chloe-chan.. the bg is quite plain ..you can used some texture or stock image from some website
i like your wall, pretty good in your first wallie. but its little bit blank or i say plain on the background. you should some texture on it so that the background is a bit awake up
nice.. i like it..
Japanese! coz all their voice is fitted to charactyer.. n they all rox!
Japanese! coz all their voice is fitted to character.. n they all rox!